“Who do we have here?” He said the right words and used the right tone, but I saw it in his eyes. There was something not quite right about him.
“Um, I’m Amanda. I’m here as part of the submissive training group.” I wanted to sound bolder, less meek and mild. Something about him made me nervous. Not the good kind of squirmy nervous, but truly scared. His eyes looked like crystals – bright, shiny – hard.
“Master Anthony, Miss Amanda was our only new submissive to show interest in caning. Can you give her a quick demo?” My guide didn’t wait for answer. He walked away quickly. Yeah, run you little scaredy cat. I didn’t blame him, but I felt completely alone and vulnerable.
“Well, girl, would you like to watch me or feel it for yourself?” His expression dared me. He wanted me to put myself at his mercy. I might be new the whole submission thing but I’m no idiot.
“I’ll watch, thanks.” Damn it, why did my voice have to sound so shaky? He just ate that shit up, grinning at me like the Big Bad Wolf.
“Suit yourself, girl. Wait here while I set up.”
I sat down on a small stool near the wall while Master Anthony set a pillow against the spanking bench – a contraption I recognized from last week’s class. He used what looked like a roll of painter’s tape to strap down the pillow.
Without glancing my way, he stepped back with the cane in his hand. “For those who are new to caning, I may start like this.”
THWACK!
The sound of the cane hitting the pillow made me jump. That was how he started out?
“Then, once I’ve got my little subby bitch where I want her, I may ratchet up the intensity just a bit.”
THWACK! THWACK!
Who the hell was this sadistic bastard? I felt the impact between cane and cotton as if it was hitting my own skin.
“And finally, when I’m good and ready to let loose…”
THWACK!
He struck so hard that the pillow exploded, feathers and fluff rained down over our heads. Sweat beaded on his forehead. His arm shook from the force of his strike.
I crossed my arms in front of my chest and pressed myself against the wall. The whole scene might have been funny if I hadn’t seen the look on his face as he wielded the cane. His last swing had been scary. His style was sadistic, unfeeling, uncaring, and I could have sworn he used the cane with a flourish of pure hate.
Welcome to Wicked Wednesday! This week’s prompt was “a flourish of hate.” There’s so much that could be done with this story, but I’ll leave the rest to your imagination.
That was wicked alright! The cane is not one of my favorites!
Mine, either!
Well and whoa! That was a scary beginning (introducing the antagonist right away like that…phew!)
Great job with the prompt and you got me all fired up…! (makes me want to read more!)
nilla
I kind of want to write more but I have too many damn projects right now to add one more. If it’s meant to be something more, my mind won’t let it go. 😉
REALLY love this. Thinking that the spanking last night may just be a warm up for dusting off the cane tonight!
Nooooooo! /giggles I’ll take the paddle, please!
Can I finish this story?? Part of me wants to, but I’m not sure I can carry it off with the same air as you.
Of course you can! Go for it!
I think I will die if someone use the cane on me like that. I am not a fan of the cane at all…
Well written!
Rebel xox
I would too. Neither am I. I kind of have a picture in my head that he’s fucking with her mind…maybe one day I’ll do something more with it. 🙂
A great example of being experienced in the scene and not saying a quick yes to a scene. Hell no, he would never be my play partner.
I know, right?
I do think there’s more to him than meets the eye – I’m thinking about that. 🙂
I am not a fan of the cane either…. give me a damn good flogging any day but not the cane
mollyxxx
No doubt! Mmm, floggers.
Ohhh those sadistic Domly grins are just pure evil! Equal parts sexy and scary. Great story, hun! xxx
Thank you! He had all kinds of thoughts running this his mind…that look meant all *kinds* of things.
[…] continuation of what I read on Kayla’s site. She wrote it for Wicked Wednesday and it stuck in my mind like a barb, demanding I carry it on. […]
Oh my goodness! Very well written . . . but I couldn’t take that sort of pain. Sometimes for me some things are best left to the imagination!!!
Xxx – K
I couldn’t either. I think he was being really extreme just to scare her. I’m sure there are some people out there who want it that hard, but she (and I) definitely aren’t one.
I’m more of a belt girl myself, but WOW!
Katie xx
The belt still scares me a little, but I can take it.
Thank you. 🙂