The barest hint of contact.
Gentle moments punctuated
By jarring impact.
My body writhes
My mind swirls
My soul sighs.
One last touch
And I fall from my knees
To lie before you…
So it’s not my usual thing for Masturbation Monday, but when words swirl in your head, sometimes this is how they come out. Take a look at what other writers are doing for this, the best of all days.
It’s different, but I like it x
Oh I like, meet me in the bedroom!
that was well crafted; I felt each line like feather-light touches!
(hope I didn’t interrupt
[…] I Surrender […]
mm– when words swirl in your head, they have such… impact 😉 Loved this one!
/giggles. You said “impact.” 😉
I loved it! It’s sparse but powerful, conjured up the images perfectly. Excellent writing 🙂
Thank you! I’m comfortable with haikus but not so much with free-form poetry but when the words hit you, they just do. 🙂
The moment of surrender… and such a delicious way to describe it! More more more!!!
It was such a brief moment in time, it seemed to deserve just a few words. But if you want more, well…okay. 😀